Watch this short video and think about editing. Well worth your time.
I nag people about proofreading and editing. If you think editing is merely looking for punctuation errors, you need to watch this video. He makes a lot of sense (and speaking of sense, he has one of those that is humorous).
Loved it! He is to editing what Kingsfield is to law!
Best regards,
Stephen A. Mesi
Deputy Attorney General IV
California Department of Justice
EAM Section
300 S. Spring Street, Suite 1702
Los Angeles, CA 90013
Tel: (213) 897-2102
Fax: (213) 897-1071
Cell: (213) 713-7181
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I bet students are terrified at first—but they learn! Speaking of Kingsfield, that character was based on my husband’s torts professor at Boalt, William Prosser. Talk about a teacher who terrified his students!
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